I have since made amendments and changes to my story since showing my storyboard to my tutor.
Change 1 - Title: 'Magic Bubble'
Change 2 - Instead of the boy popping the bubble and a whole load of magical things happen, the boy gets engulfed by the bubble that is forever growing behind him as he watches the shop owner blowing bubbles.
Change 3 - The shop owner pops the bubble once the boy has had his fun.
Ending - The boy gets hurled to the ground after the bubble pops. The shop owner gestures for some money to pay for this magical project, the boy digs deep, pulls out some change and buys the item. He then leaves the shop skipping into the distance leaving a trail of magical splashes behind him.
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